Build A Novel is game where you create "part" of a story by adding on to the commenter's story before you. You can be creative and quirky as you want, but keep to the topic/subject of the comment before you. Since the novel will be authored by many commenters, the story could end up being a huge mess, or a really creative one! ;-)
Just keep in mind that when all the comments are read, they all make up ONE NOVEL!
Just keep in mind that when all the comments are read, they all make up ONE NOVEL!
Here's an example:
Lady Maryann said...
It's a cold dark spooky night. I wore my water-proof coat, boots and ...-
Dyla Ray said...
-... my umbrella hat and yellow floaties. I brave the violent downpour of rain. I can barely see anything. My heart is beating hard and fast. Then I saw light ...-
Queen Solita said...
-... light from the overhead neonlights of McDonalds. I quickened my steps and went straight to the Cashier. May I have a Cheeseburger please? Something caught my attention on the far corner of the room...-
Rules:
1. Your "part" of the story can not be something rude or offensive.
2. Keep to the subject. Continue the story from the above comment.
3. Do not add/continue on to your own comment. Let somebody add on it first. Do not end the story.
4. Start your comment with -... and end it with ...- to show that you are continuing a story and that your story should be added/continued on.2. Keep to the subject. Continue the story from the above comment.
3. Do not add/continue on to your own comment. Let somebody add on it first. Do not end the story.
Source: Thanks to Aguair ;-)
I will post the first Part of the Novel ;-)
Let's see what kind of novel we can build! ;-)
*If you have questions about this game, please go to the Games Help Center and post your question there. Do not comment your questions here. Any comments that are not related to this game will be deleted.
57 COMMENTS:
It's a cold dark spooky night. I wore my water-proof coat, boots and ...-
-... socks to keep me warm even though it was...-
-... all wet and soggy. My feet make squishy sounds with every step. I thought to myself, "Boy! how can I be invisible if I can be heard from a mile away?! Aaarrrgggghhhh!". I pulled ...-
-... My Mobile out and turned it off. "Golly, OIts cold" I said to myself clutching my coat tigher. Then I saw it it was...-
-...A penguin lost and looking for its iceberg.I took up the penguin and...-
...Brought him to my mobile home to have...
-...some chicken burgers and hot chocolate! I asked him what was his name, and he answered it was...-
-... Moosey Keith. Sadly, he was allergic to chicken then he...-
-...vanished in a spectacular show of fireworks and blinding light! What in the name of Gary the Gadget Guy is happening, I pondered. Then, I turned around to face...-
he windo on ly seein shadows lurching in the forest and sneak ing down to the cove so i slipped on my slippers and fluffy coat stepped out side and..........
-...was kidnapped by two baddy penguins and was brought to...-
...A small dark underground cave that seemed to lead to a place so familiar that...
-...I formulated a plan to escape. I will distract the bad penguins and call...-
-...Rockhopper! He comes flying in on his ship, and this time, his free item is...-
-... an airplane! i jumped in and we...-
-...sped toward Rockhopper Island! This is the stuff of Club Penguin Youtube videos, I thought. The island, shining in all of its fantastical glory, looked strangely dark and demented. I was about to question Rockhopper about this when he suddenly...-
the baddy penguins attacked again! i got out my black puffle, fed it SUPAH RED-HOT CHILI PEPPAHS and then he turned into a...
...pie! i was so hungry that i ate it all up! "oops," i thought. "now what's going to happen to me??!!!" luckily, a penguin called REEL-INSIDE zipped out of no-where and screamed,"...-
-...wahahahaha! for like five times which distracted the baddy penguins and bought me time to escape. i waddled hurriedly to...-
-...an igloo i saw a distance away. i waddled to it and flung open the door. "OMIGOSH! IT WAS MOOSEY KEITH! i ran towards him and begged, " please, you've gotta help me!" He nodded his head and...-
-... then without warning, he threw a gigantic slab of beef at me! I toppled over backwards and...-
hit my head hard against the wall before I fainted.
I was half-conscious when I felt a tear trickle down my cheek. Why am I crying? i lifted my flipper and touched my eyes. they were dry.
i slowly opened my eyes and saw Moosey Keith crying saying, "i'm sorry. i've been a nervous wreck lately and you surprised me. are you hungry? how do you want your beef cooked?" I...
...- sat up and said that i am a vegetarian even though that was a lie. i just wasn't hungry right then.
"what day is it?" i asked.
"the 30th of september" Moosey Kieth said"
OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! i yelled. it had been...-
-...the day I knew I would die! Suddenly, without warning, Moosey Keith whipped off his FAKE mask and cackled, "BWHAHAHAHA!!! I AM THE BADDY PENGUIN, LOOKACHOOA!!!" I turned white with shock. I dashed for the door and...-
-...waddled as fast as i could heading for the beacon so i can grab a jet pack and zoom off to rockhopper island once more and ask RH for help. RH said...-
-..."Why hello, I was wondering where you had gone!" "The baddy penguins captured me and... Well, it's a long story," I said. Rockhopper motioned for me to take a seat beside him in a beach chair. I sat down and, to my astonishment, Rh turned black, hat and all! He pulled out a tranquilizer gun, and before I was shot, the last thing I heard was, "Ninja"...-
-...I was woken up by a flash of light. What was that? "URGHHH!!!" something growled. I screamed in fear and shock. I saw... it was RH... in a Ninja suit! "awww... i didn't know you would fall for it," RH exclaimed. I looked around...-
-...He was talking to me. Nobody else was on the island. Although, he looks a little different even wihout the ninja suit, he has a darker shad of red, shorter beard, smuggier face, and a little more ignorant. I asked him about Rockhopper Island. He couldn't answer well. Then when I mentioned the baddy penguins again, he screamed in fury. In my shock, I couldn't believe my eyes. He...-
-...lunged at me. I dodged him and ran all around the island with him hot on my heals. Then at that precise moment i spotted Moosey keith. He was running toward me in a bikini and so i said "Moosey! where have you been." and he replied "ive been...-
-...Moosey Keith was about to continue, but Rh was making strange flipper signals, and, out of nowhere, seven black ninjas appeared. "Do not take one step, bird. That way, you're pain will be minimized." Shocked, I pulled a Matrix-like move and the tranq darts whizzed by my Tenor hat. I spun around to see Moosey fall to the ground. He had been hit! I ran with all my might, but they were too fast for me. I stopped dead, tranqued in the heart...-
-...I was so very shocked! Luckily, I was able to reach out for my mobile and call...-
-... my puffle! i was in a panic attack so i didn't know what i was dialing. that was when i fell. i woke up afterward to find myself in a little jail cell and realized the ninjas had captured me. "not again. i already got captured once" i muttered under my breath. there was food but i didn't dare to eat it in case it was...-
-...poisonous. Luckily, wherever I go, I bring a little kit. It contains my magnifying glass, my sweater and a little journal ooh! I also have a manual in here. So I reached in my kit and got my...-
-...magnifying glass.Ive gone hunting my MP3 using the my magnifying glass.Ive looked under the table,chair and bed,Then ive founded it.The Mp3 was stepped and broken.:(.Now, Ive dont have a gadget to listen to my favorite song that is...-
-...the Mission Impossible Theme Song! A shame that my MP3 is broken, I thought. I always do my best detective work while listening to spy music...-
...-and the MP3 had also been a disguised weapon i could have used to blast the wall and gotten out of there. i would have to find another way out of here. then i remembered that my magnifying glass was also a disguised weapon. it was a...-
...jingle tingle flipper-me-bob! gary the gadget dude had made it for me. he was g's cosin and lived on an island not to far off the east coast of club penguin. he had told me "to use it pull this trigger and turn this knob push this button crank this crank put up the volume just here turn it over in your hands 583,674 times and put it on sandy ground. but in a case of emergency just press the blue button." the machine did everything a penguin could wish for. it did...
-...transported me to the SUPER-DUPER-ULTRA-AWESOMELY SECRET Ninja Room (hidden inside the base)! Oh, for the love of Aunt Arctic, I grumbled. I had wanted to get OUT of this prison, not go even further in! But what I saw next made me change my mind... I could see row upon row of giant, upright, test tubes. But it was what was inside that rocked me to my very core: All colors of penguins were suspended inside the tubes, inhaling what seemed to be cream soda. The tubes were labled, so I glanced at a few of the penguin's names. And I was shocked to find LADY MARYANN A.K.A. INSPECTOR CRAZY, MIMO777, and WWEADAM. If I remembered correctly, these were the only penguins to recieve the mysterious and shady e-mails from CP Moderator Billybob about a new line of plush toys... "Hold it, prisoner." The cold, icy voice of the Ninja Sentry stopped me in my tracks. I knew there was no way I'd let them catch me again, but as far as I could tell, there wasn't any other way out...-
-... But there was! I ran toward the ninja-room place and I saved Lady Maryann, Mimo and WWEadam. I looked over my shoulder and was surprised to find...-
-...CP Mod Rsnail blocking the doorway! With a sinister smile he motioned for two more Ninjas to immobilize me. Not this time, I thought. With amazingly awesome skill (if I do say so myself), I leapt up into the air as the two newbie guards crashed into each other, headfirst. I gracefully landed, and, upon arrival, flung my spy phone's comb at Rsnail's foot. Howling in pain, he tumbled backward through the door allowing me to make my escape. But yet, once again, something was stopping me. As I flew past the cells lining the corridor, a familiar hairy face greeted me. "Wait, don't go!" a weak voice said. I looked closer to find none other than Herbert P. Bear, Esq. pleading for me to help him. Now it became clear why Herbert hadn't been seen around the island lately... Grudgingly, I let him out, and he followed me down the stairwell leading to the exterior of the building. Then I remembered something. "Hey, Herbert... Where's Klutzy?" The gargantuan polar bear's great body sagged, and he suddenly looked as if on the brink of tears. He said nothing, but a sad feeling overcame me as walked out to meet the beatiful sunset looming ahead...-
"Did they capture Klutzy?" I asked.Herbert looked as if he were going to cry.He said,"They took him prisoner at the cove.I took out my spy phone and called my spy team. Five minutes later a jet was hovering over Herbert and I. The ladder was let down and the driver said to jump in. I shrugged and climbed up. When we were in the plane flying over all of club Penguin I couldnt see a penguin in sight. I said to Herbert"Where are all the penguins?" He replied,"I dont know" but something fishy was going on. I thought about it on the plane ride. Why did Herbert get captured when the ninjas only wanted penguins? That was what happened to the penguins. But penguins were supposed to love each other. The plane landed without me knowing. The pilot yelled"NOW LANDED AT THE COVE" over the speaker system. The next thing we know we are looking all over the cove for Klutzy.I look in the shack.No Klutzy there. Herbert said "They went in a boat to get rid of Klutzy." I said"How long ago was that?" He said "about 20 minutes." they hadnt gone out long because it would be about 1 hour for them to drown Kultzy.Herbert and I walked over to the water.We stood at the edge of the water.I took out my spy phone to call PSA to come get a boat for me. Just when I was about to push "TALK' Herbert pushed me into the water. I couldnt swim! I was just learning. But I couldnt swim! I fell into the water and tried to swim up but i just couldnt. I thought about all the things I COULD have done if I were alive that I havent done before.I thought I was going to die, When I saw a light. It was ............
-...a big white submarine with One of my penguin friends inside.He pulled me down into the submarine before I could drown.Then I heard my friend say"goin up!" Before i could yell NO,My friend went on shore.Herbert caught him and threw him into the cave before i could catch him andsave his life.Herbert locked the door and turned toward me. With mischief in his eye he said.....-
..."I'm SOOOOO sorry I have to do this agent" he said sarcastically. He grabbed me and stuffed me through a small capsule that looked like it might have held a small fish. He threw me far into the ocean, and as soon as the capsule hit the water it vanished, and I tumbled into the water. The last thing I heard before I blacked out was...
-... BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i woke up to find myself NOT drowned but tied up in a chair. and who HAD to be across from me? Herbert. "UUUUUGH" i said to myself. "THIS HAS BEEN ENOUGH FOR 1 DAY!" Then Herbert started talking. "i saved you only because i want to tell someone my plan. so here we go:
i wanted to RULE club penguin. and after many tries RUINED by you stinky, lazy, no good agents, i found i knew plan: USE YOU!!!!!!!!!! (bwahahahaha!) so I hypnotized first rockhopper, then rsnail, then many agents! (bwahahahaha again) finally, i will get all the important people who run club penguin, and through them, I WILL RULE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
i said "you can never do that! YOUR A MADMAN!
"la la la la la la i can't here you" herbert said. " and now that i have you here, we are going to toss a coin. heads your hypnotized, tails you die. he tossed the coin and...-
...Herbert fliped the coin. I was as worried as heck! The coin landed on....TAILS! But quickly as fast as you can say "bada bing bong bee" I took out my super huge sissors! But Herbert grabed the sissors and pointed it at me! " OHHHH no! your not going anywhere!" Herbert said laughing. I took out my spy phone and called G! "Hello?" G said. " G come to..." Before I could say somethin' he took the spy phone and threw it! Then, We saw the pizza guy!"ohh!" Herbert ran and tiped the guy but he droped the scisorrs on the floor! I quickly took them with my feet and cute the rope! I snuck out and hid behind a bush...
-...and quietly ate the Buffalo Wings I had brought along for the trip incase I was ever REALLY hungry. As Herbert was rummaging through the vegetation searching for me and muttering something, I caught the words "Those fowl birds", "Ya can't trust 'em". I was beginning to feel a bit cocky at this point, and started throwing B Wing bones at the bear's head. "Lol," I said, and the speech bubble rose over the bush. Shoot! HPB Esq. howled in excitement and ran over to me. I really didn't want to do this to him, but I had NO OTHER choice. "Herbert," I began, "Remember Mission 9?" "Of course," he said, "I stopped your P.S.A. from surveying me while I told Klutzy about the plan involving puffles..." He stopped short, realizing that he was about to give away his plan. "Anyways, when I placed the camera by the Ski Lodge, I saw your pathetic victory dance with Klutzy. And managed to get a few pics." He gasped, and I grinned...-
-... i showed him the pictures, waving it above his head when he tried to grab it. NOOOOOOOOOOOO! he yelled. i went to his snow mobile and got on. he followed me but i was too fast. suddenly...-
-..... Suddenly a storm approaches, and you don't know what to do. You risk youself to....-
¡Eh!! Eso no fue un buen seguidor, hozmond Jefe! Permítanme empezar de nuevo el suyo!
-... De repente, usted va demasiado rápido, y tu también en un gigante de Blizzard. Usted no puede ver por donde va la nieve en tu móvil, entonces se caen de un acantilado! Intenta averiguar cuál es el próximo paso ...-
save all the penguins!
¿Has siquiera saben lo que he dicho? Y se supone que está para iniciar con -.... y al final con ....-! Ya no hacerlo bien!
Rosa Abril said....
She first said....
Eh! That was not a good follower, hozmond Boss! Let me start again yours!
-... Suddenly, you go too fast, and you also vanish in a Blizzard. You can not see where you're going on your snow mobile, then you fall off a cliff! You try to find out what the next step is...-
She secondly said...
Did you even know what I said? And that is supposed to start with -.... and end with ....-! No longer do it well!
Sometimes she is really weird....
Bye!
Continued from Tutso's last entry:
-...Suddenly, an orange puffle fell out of the sky and crashed through the Snow Trekker's windshield. After escaping the vehicle approximately three seconds before it collided with a nearby tree and exploded, I sat down to have a talk with the mysterious orange puffle. "Where have you come from? Why are you here?" I asked, using several gestures in an attempt to help it understand. "Me...is...Puffy," began the extraordinary furball. "I have...come to tell you...of an impending danger, one...from which there is...no escape." This was like a scene straight from Space Adventure, I thought. Then, for the slightest moment, I thought I could hear whispers emanating from the brush...-
-... which turned out to be the rainbow puffle! the orange puffle continued, "we have been traveling... together... for a month..to warn penguins of danger... you must leave the island..." "WHAT!" i yelled and then started to run in circles, screaming...-
and asking them why and they told me that squidsoid is coming and gamma girl oshadow guy are trapped on rock hopper island....
-...the orange puffle told me:"it not squidoiz, it's worst, it is named the mega puffle of doom. it is a giant puffle with all the powers, it was a G invention but it failed, and it will use the fire power to destroy this island so you all penguins need to evacute to...-
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